Thursday, October 4, 2012

I think that revision plays into your “creative process” by letting your mind expand and it allows other ideas to unfold. The article we had to read on revision said that you should take some time away from the paper, and then come back to it later. When coming back to it, you can re-read what you have wrote and you might think that it is out of order, needs things added to it, find a repetition in words or your idea might have evolved into something different then your original outlook. When you come up with an idea in writing, or just in everyday life, there might be some place needed for revision.

When it comes to writing a recipe, you can always make room to revise it because you want it to be very clear, and you want to make it as concise as you can. You can also sometimes revise the ingredients, make substitutions or make adjustments to the amount of ingredients used in the recipe.  You want the recipe to be easily understandable so a person you share it with will be successful in trying it, too.

When writing instructions or directions on how to make anything, there is always a long process. You start out with writing all of the steps, and sometimes you need to make it shorter. You should want to condense it so other people can easily follow it.

1 comment:

  1. I think take some away from the paper, and then come back to it later is important too. I often do this because I have a lot of grammatical mistakes.
    when I do this action I try to be other person to see my assignment objectively.

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